The Pages Sesh

Are you a writer ready to query but unsure if you've started in the right place? Need one more set of eyes on your opening pages to ensure they will effectively hook the agents on your list?

Great opening pages grab the reader's attention from line one, reveal commercial viability, and leave agents hungry for more. And when you're querying agents, you have one shot in those opening pages to show them you have what it takes. That means nailing voice, pacing, characterization, emotion, dialogue and so much more all in 10-20 pages.

The Pages Sesh includes a 60-minute Zoom call to discuss your manuscript, assess voice, comps, author bio, and publishing goals. After our call, I will provide in-line notes and feedback on your opening 20 pages (10,000 words) to help you get plucked from the slush pile and have agents requesting more. 

While this sesh does provide high level feedback on you query letter, query letter revision and agent strategy is NOT included in this sesh. It is always strongly encouraged to purchase a One Shot package for full, well-rounded prep and positioning prior to querying.

You will receive an email within 24 hours of purchase with additional instructions and a link to schedule your call. 

Please note: a very small number of querying service spaces are opened each month so space is limited.